Simulation Hockey League

My homie is away right now, who I usually get feedback from with my songs... So I have wrote some samples right now and I want people to tell me if my lyrics are alright and if they flow with the message of the song... Still dont know if I will sing them or rap. Don't worry this is emotional stuff and no Based tracks.. SO ill PM my shit to give me feedback... so.., Who wants to do it?

I think one song is something just to do and I know the rhymes are basic and the other one will be all out with a good message behind the song.

As long as it is not any of the based stuff, i am willing to give it a shot.

Quote:Originally posted by Fernando@Nov 26 2012, 01:31 PM
As long as it is not any of the based stuff, i am willing to give it a shot.

No its not... and its like 3 bars on each song.. i just wanna know if its good so far. ill pm you the stuff.

Probs cant help but i wanna check it out tbh

Quote:Originally posted by DylanJK@Nov 26 2012, 01:47 PM
Probs cant help but i wanna check it out tbh

after nando gives me the feedback ill PM you the stuff.

Hit me up, I think it's pretty well known I got some pretty good flow with lyrics

Quote:Originally posted by Maxy@Nov 26 2012, 04:07 PM
Hit me up, I think it's pretty well known I got some pretty good flow with lyrics

ill send you the good song the other song seems like a filler track on a mixtape.

send it to JayTee

Got some more... if anyone wants to read ill pM You it and you gotta give me feedback