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Awesomecakes 3/29 - Jobin - 03-25-2020 RE: Awesomecakes 3/29 - Carpy48 - 04-25-2020 Hi awesomecakes, thank you for your submission! Your signature was assessed and commented on by a panel of 6 graders, who determined the following grade value and comments. Highlight here is the helmet to the right hand side of the sig; well done there. Text isn't bad but I wish it matched something else on the sig because it definitely stands out..almost a bit too much with that yellow-y color. This would benefit from some lighting using stocks or the paint brush tool over either render's helmet. Having two renders is always difficult, because I believe one should be the main render and the second one should be somewhere in the background. I like the choice of text, but I think the placement in the corner isn't great. Overlapping the render's body/blocker would have probably looked better. I think there needs to be some stock work, as well as some lighting. This would definitely help you fill out more space and have a more cohesive looking sig. There was mixed feedback on the effectiveness of the dual renders. The black and white one works as a background render, but has the contrast levels of a foreground element. Perhaps tweaking the curves could help move one of the renders look more/less dynamic. Sig 1: 3.5 / 5 Total Payout: $875K