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Vid-Exclusive: Path of a Dragon - DeletedAtUserRequest - 04-25-2021
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Dragons.Tv introduces the first S59 commercial, ‘Path of a Dragon!’RE: Vid-Exclusive: Path of a Dragon - Mika_Kandinsky - 05-10-2021
-Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 5/6
-Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 4/5
-Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 3/4
-Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 3/3
15 = 2.5M
I really liked your graphics in this one. I thought it was a little jarring going from the first style of color to the second one where it was sepia. I liked the more red look that went with the team colors over the sepia color. I would have liked to maybe have had something a little more interesting going on in the audio, maybe something that builds to a crescendo of sorts. Felt a little bit flat in the audio with only the music track. Needed some kind of Voice over maybe to give it some drama. The edit itself was nice and I liked the slow mo going with the music. nice one!