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karlssens 9/16 - karlssens - 09-17-2018 RE: karlssens 9/16 - karey - 09-17-2018 really well done man!, I love the effects and the subtle text in the background. The gif is also buttery smooth. my only complaint is that this lacks texture as the clear video doesn't help the depth. I would add some texture onto top of the white text, maybe something like a concrete texture subtly on a clipping mask over the white text to make it less white. Other than that, this is really really well done, I hope you're proud of this one. edit: may as well grade this lol since I did all the typing. 9/10 - 800K with a 50k bonus for effort Total Payout: 850K not going to close this until the time period is over. Just ping me if you add a new sig @karlssens