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2x Deng 3/3 - Deng - 02-18-2019
![[Image: goldobin-1.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/wL3BWhW/goldobin-1.jpg)
![[Image: golyshev-1.jpg]](https://i.ibb.co/Pj0Kxyg/golyshev-1.jpg)
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RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Lazyeye - 02-19-2019
@Deng is the 2x for double media week?
RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Deng - 02-19-2019
02-19-2019, 12:55 AMLazyeye Wrote: @Deng is the 2x for double media week?
yes
RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Lazyeye - 02-19-2019
02-19-2019, 04:47 AMDeng Wrote:02-19-2019, 12:55 AMLazyeye Wrote: @Deng is the 2x for double media week?
yes
Ok, just letting you know the graphics week doh keep bonus will start next week. If you want to use these, I can edit the title to reflect next week
RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Deng - 02-19-2019
02-19-2019, 12:33 PMLazyeye Wrote:02-19-2019, 04:47 AMDeng Wrote: yes
Ok, just letting you know the graphics week doh keep bonus will start next week. If you want to use these, I can edit the title to reflect next week
Oh I didn't know that. If you move this for next week can I do new post for this week?
RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Lazyeye - 02-19-2019
02-19-2019, 01:39 PMDeng Wrote:Yep!02-19-2019, 12:33 PMLazyeye Wrote: Ok, just letting you know the graphics week doh keep bonus will start next week. If you want to use these, I can edit the title to reflect next week
Oh I didn't know that. If you move this for next week can I do new post for this week?
RE: 2x Deng 2/24 - Deng - 02-19-2019
02-19-2019, 02:46 PMLazyeye Wrote:Ok move this for next week02-19-2019, 01:39 PMDeng Wrote: Oh I didn't know that. If you move this for next week can I do new post for this week?Yep!
RE: 2x Deng 3/3 - Julio Tokolosh - 03-18-2019
Sig 1 : 4/10 - 400K
The addition of the vignette didn't add too much depth, and the and the simplicity of the choices with the text don't make sense within the piece. I appreciate the focus put on tweaking the player render, but not enough alterations were made for it to make sense. An easy way to get this closer to a 5 would be to look into the rule of thirds.
Sig 2 : 5/10 - 500K
This signature is more tonally focused. While I'm not sure how much was a borrowed image, and how was an original alteration, your choices with the text tell me that you know what works. The text sizing and color choices look better than Sig 1, but could easily be manipulated to improve the layout.
Sig 3: 5/10 - 500K
The muddiness of the text really hurts this signature. While the stock background elements and player render have basic lighting filters applied to them, the choices with the text color, placement, and potential enhancements cause the piece to look accidental.
Total: 1.4M x 2 = 2.8M