Create Account

Mike Izzy 2/10
#1
(This post was last modified: 02-09-2019, 05:14 PM by DeletedAtUserRequest.)




Eyebrow

[Image: OnGNB1G.gif]



[Image: cgv4vCv.png]|[Image: 95lCCDx.png]|[Image: KgwtJeY.png]
Knights|Dragons|Austria
Reply
#2

@Mike Izzy

Great highlight package! I loved all the graphics throughout this. The name bars, titles, and keys for instant replay were great. The content was almost spot on and while the goals were out of order from the original game I don't hold that against you because to find a game that matched everything perfectly would be almost impossible. Besides the final score came out the correct way and the team colours are within ball park so props! I liked that you stylized the instant replays to goals/saves so the viewer knew more clearly what we were watching and what to watch for. I also loved that you tried to highlight a player or section with the burst of lines it helped draw the eye. The only critique I have and the reason this wasn't a perfect score was that I was not a huge fan of the gradient style for the goals. It worked once or twice when the camera angle was low and the dark top of the gradient blocks more of the crowd and can better highlight on ice play but for overhead replays it was a bit distracting. I also caught a few instances where the transition from stylized back to normal play was just a few frames out and didn't match perfect. Not a big thing but maybe try using a more defined transition to make that work a bit cleaner. Audio was great I loved the background you added and noted it changed with the pace of the play which really kept me into it. Pacing was great, it was more of a game summary than a highlight package and I think captures all facets of the game while keeping things moving. Great job hope to see more of this!

Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 6/6
Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 4/5
Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 4/4
Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 3/3
 


Total : 17 = 4.5M

Tibuk Soonika - G - Tampa Bay Barracuda| Portal Page
BarracudaSwitzerlandKnights
Reply
#3

04-29-2019, 01:40 PMchetib Wrote: @Mike Izzy

Great highlight package! I loved all the graphics throughout this. The name bars, titles, and keys for instant replay were great. The content was almost spot on and while the goals were out of order from the original game I don't hold that against you because to find a game that matched everything perfectly would be almost impossible. Besides the final score came out the correct way and the team colours are within ball park so props! I liked that you stylized the instant replays to goals/saves so the viewer knew more clearly what we were watching and what to watch for. I also loved that you tried to highlight a player or section with the burst of lines it helped draw the eye. The only critique I have and the reason this wasn't a perfect score was that I was not a huge fan of the gradient style for the goals. It worked once or twice when the camera angle was low and the dark top of the gradient blocks more of the crowd and can better highlight on ice play but for overhead replays it was a bit distracting. I also caught a few instances where the transition from stylized back to normal play was just a few frames out and didn't match perfect. Not a big thing but maybe try using a more defined transition to make that work a bit cleaner. Audio was great I loved the background you added and noted it changed with the pace of the play which really kept me into it. Pacing was great, it was more of a game summary than a highlight package and I think captures all facets of the game while keeping things moving. Great job hope to see more of this!

Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 6/6
Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 4/5
Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 4/4
Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 3/3
 


Total : 17 = 4.5M

Thanks!

[Image: OnGNB1G.gif]



[Image: cgv4vCv.png]|[Image: 95lCCDx.png]|[Image: KgwtJeY.png]
Knights|Dragons|Austria
Reply




Users browsing this thread:
1 Guest(s)




Navigation

 

Extra Menu

 

About us

The Simulation Hockey League is a free online forums based sim league where you create your own fantasy hockey player. Join today and create your player, become a GM, get drafted, sign contracts, make trades and compete against hundreds of players from around the world.