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Edmonton Wins the S49 Challenge Cup: A Breakdown
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hurts but a great video nonetheless

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Get yourself a Hagan jersey, frig yeah

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uh showing us all we can make Hockey Machinimas


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@ckroyal92 look at me, i am the captain now

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(This post was last modified: 10-02-2019, 12:59 PM by chetib.)

Chetib Wrote:Cool highlights video! Really like this for recapping games because 1) it keeps you in the SHL and 2) gives creators a lot of control over stuff. Everything looks really good with lower thirds, jerseys and even that pervy wolf mascot. The video all around looks really good and other than the awkward movements of EA animations but I am not going to ding you for that (sort your shit out EA). Biggest issue I had with this video was your Audio. The first and most immediate issue I would say if that your voice sounds very echo-y, might want to get the microphone a little closer to your mouth or look into some sound filters to reduce the echo. Also noticed a few times I could hear mouse clicks which is probably just an audio clip that needed to be trimmed a tiny bit more to cut that off. Finally a bit of a ambient sound would have been nice, crowd cheering, players crashing, game noise, etc. Audio is one of those killers that if it's done well you don't even notice it and it totally puts a mediocre edit over the top but if its bad it can ruin a video faster than anything. Yours was ok here just a few little nit picky things. Last note, while your commentary was great (and it was really good and engaging) it felt like you were talking just a bit too fast and I lost a few words here and there. Slow it down and you'll be in a good spot.

Great job, hope you keep doing more of these videos!

Another good highlights video finishing off the season. I don't have too much to add from the last one so I thought I would just quote my last response here as well. One last note on audio for this one, I noticed a few more pops and clicks when an audio clip would end, good way to avoid that is to throw a quick 3-5 frame dissolve on the audio and it will make them start and end silky smooth. I also thought your pacing for your voice over was much better in this video from the last one, I could more clearly hear everything you were saying and you didn't sound rushed. 

Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 6/6
Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 5/5
Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 2/4
Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 3/3
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16 = 3M
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Total: 3.5M

Edit: I suck at math.

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