Sig 1: 6/10 = 600K
The black border around the signature is uneven, making it more distracting than it needs to be. The lightning and color flashes in the background are great, but i wish that they had been incorporated into the player render more, and as the case is, they fall pretty flat. some masking and layering could really help. the lightning in some instances appears pretty flat and gray (behind the legs). It might be a smoke brush, but it looks like a lightning brush applied with not enough hardness. The jersey swap looks well done in respect to the Raiders' black uniforms, but the player's placement seems a little awkward. We currently see him skating on smoke, in hot pursuit of an orange blur in the bottom left. I think if the render size was increased to take up more of the canvas we would get a more aggressive and compelling composition while seeing more details from the jersey and player. the face looks very pale, which could be the case, but eith how frosted the visor appears from this distance, there is more that i'd like to see. The like the text placement and the gradient is ok, but the all-caps in the calligraphy font makes it a little tough to read, and with such a faux-organic typeface, all of those "R"s next to each other make it look kind of chunky. the team name looks good though.
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