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Esso 3/31
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Sig 1: Wow, this one is huge. Overall there is a lot to like here, but also a lot to improve. First of all good job with the jersey swap, looking great. The background is relatively simple, but the colors match the team colors so that works well. I see the effort of adjusting the Raptors logo, but try to blend it in more with the jersey. What is a bit unfortunate, perhaps because of the format chosen, is that both text and logo are floating around without a clear connection to the render. Try to get them to overlap ever so slightly to create both depth and a connection. Now you have a lot of empty space and three separate elements and I don't know which one to focus on.
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Sig 2: This sig is very similar compared to the first one and in fact everything mentioned above applies here as well. A solution in this case would've been to make the render larger so it fills out more of the image and then add the text slightly on top of it. I find it also a bit odd to have the Raptors logo twice, one floating around and once on the jersey. That looks a bit odd. I like the choice of background a little bit more in this one.
6/10 (600k)

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Esso 3/31 - by Esso2264 - 03-27-2019, 01:44 PM
RE: Esso 3/31 - by hhh81 - 03-27-2019, 02:37 PM
RE: Esso 3/31 - by Carpy48 - 04-07-2019, 02:01 PM



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