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Some people are very good at working out physically, some are better mentally. To perform at a high professional level requires both. Oliver Castillon has been working on his physical game for a long time and is finally reaching his prime, but his mental game has been lacking in recent seasons. For all of his core and lower body strength, he's had a difficult time with the rollercoaster between success and failure on the ice, especially in the post-season. This off-season, sports therapy has been added to his regimen. He's yet to really test his new skills, but he's hopeful that he'll have an easier time adjusting his performance and expectations through the season.
He's also been working more on his speed and passing, since those were the areas where he made a few costly mistakes as the season wore on and in the IIHF tournament this off-season. Oliver hopes that between the improved mental fortitude and better passing, the LA Panthers will make another trip to the Challenge Cup Finals and bring in another trophy at the end of the season!
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