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hewasajazzman
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Sig 1-4. 1/5 $200k bonus
im going to grade these all together since they essentially have the same sort of work done to them. the highlight of these is the jersey swaps, they could a bit more manipulation on the colors to make them perfect but you are well on your way in that aspect. the swaps are the reason you got the bonuses. the renders are sized and placed decently but generally you are going to want everything else pulled in tight together, much like in your 2nd and 4th sigs, rather than spaced out like in the 1st and 3rd. the simpler text works better as opposed to the text in the Izzy sig... which just ends up looking a bit cheesy. the render duplication behind the renders could work but is a bit heavy handed, you need other elements to make it blend in and work out well. try different effects on the duplicated render other than the mosaic style as well. try to pay attention to the coloring on the renders face throughout the entire time you are working on your sig. certain effects or adjustments on the face can really take away from the sig. the 1st and 4th sigs look just fine but the face in 2nd is quite muted compared to the rest of the sig, may be due to the lens flare on the neck/shoulder, while the 3rd is over saturated. your backgrounds are decent but also try adding stocks over your renders, away from important areas like the face, and using different blending methods to create depth in your sig. $1.8 mil
Julio Tokolosh
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1: 1.5/5 2: 1.5/5 3: 1.5/5 4: 2.5/5 Total Awarded: $750K |
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