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Welcome to the graphic media portion of the media forum! For your first graphic post, you are eligible for double pay, so i have tacked on that multiplier at the end.

Sig 1: 3.5/5 - $875k
Really nice and clean. good use of color and light leaks. im not sure about the outline around the render, it might be a thin drop shadow, a stroke, or loose masking, but makes the image look more like a collage, while the rest of the image looks relatively cohesive.

Sig 2: 2.5/5 - $625k
You run into the same outline problem in this one as you do in the first. The render is also relatively unmodified, the fade into the background is a good show of depth, but the masking near the shoulder is pretty loose and overlaps with the player, fighting the depth. The text is pretty cool, and the texturing with the logo and framing with the soft red lines looks nice. the larger/softer white overlay fights the image because it is shown behind the render when a softer/blurred image would be in the unfocused foreground (it works to showthe contrast between the legs and the background but doesnt match the sharpness of the other elements near it in depth).

Sig 3: 3/5 - $750k + 100k = $850k
This looks pretty cool. The custom lighting looks really good, and the floating particles help sell the beam of light. You missed a big opportunity by not manipulating the render (or at least editing some of the face mask lighting) but this looks pretty good. i wish you had made some jersey alterations, that would have looked great. I added a bonus for the render light manipulation.

Sig 4: 3/5 - $750k
The damaged film/red light leak that covers the image is pretty interesting. the text works very well with it and the drop shadow really compliments the depth. The tweaks to the sharpness look good, and even the blurred/colored background render looks ok, but there isnt any aspect that ties the main render to the background.

Total Payout: $3.1m x 2 = $6.2m

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