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Calgary New Uniform Commercial
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rewatch our new uniform commercial live on Dragons.Tv!.

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Knights|Dragons|Austria
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-Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 3/6
-Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 4/5
-Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 4/4
-Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 3/3


14 = 2.0M

Nice editing and some really tasteful use of shots with some color effects on them. I'm not sure what the sandwich was all about? That seemed weird. Also, without you saying it's a commercial for a new jersey, I wouldn't know what this is. It was also a bit awkard the way the dragons logo fades up and then cuts off too quickly. Let something like that land for a second to give the viewer time to take it in. Pacing was perfect for a commercial. Thought the music worked really well, nice work!

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