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WJC S59 Team Sweden Roster Announcement
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-Content (Relevant, Informative, Unique) 5/6
-Video (Unique, Professional, Stylized, Clean) 2/5
-Audio (Clear, Appropriate, Mix between VO/Music) 3/4
-Pacing (Too slow? Too Fast? Too long? Too short?) 2/3

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Good little intro video. I really liked that it was all team Sweden content that you chose as opposed to going for individual renders. King Carl was a nice touch also. A couple quick issues I had that brough the score down a little lower.

-The aspect ratios/video resolutions were different a number of time especially at the top. I think it would have flowed better if everything shared the same dimensions and had the same black space throughout the video.
-The Music worked well but the mix was bit unbalanced. If there was BG sound on the clips they had a tendency to drown out the music.
-I found the shots a tad repetitive. There was a lot of Wide shots and I would have liked to see a bit more variety. But what you have is what you have, and you may have been limited if you were going for all team swede material.
-I also noticed a few jump cuts (edits that have a flash of frame or freeze frame that look out of place or jarring).

Other than those things I think you did a good job and hope to see more videos from you in the future!

Tib

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