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Julio Tokolosh 02/17
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I just want to start off by saying I love the fact that your render is a literal cow. That made me laugh pretty hard. 

Signature: 8/10 (825k) The color scheme works really well. The red in the pants helps draw the eye to the render and add some color to the piece. The placement of the text and render also works. Because the render is literally a cow, has a dynamic pose, and the only source of color, our eye is going to be naturally drawn to it. You balanced that well with a heavy dark font in the text. The background is subtle enough that it doesn't take over the piece. The snow is a little heavy and makes the signature a little harder to see but I do definitely commend the effort here. The only things I would really make suggestions on are that it does fall a little flat. The snow helps bring something very close to us but it also pushes the text and the render into the background making it feel very flat. Adding an effect (maybe lighter snow in the foreground and adding more in between the render/text and the background or something like that) could help bring those parts out to pop a little more. Great Job!

Jerseys: 2/3 (200k) Only 2 jerseys made but both are unique and are aesthetically pleasing. I love the teal and yellow combo.

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Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Julio Tokolosh - 02-17-2019, 12:40 PM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Good_Ole_Kimmy - 02-17-2019, 12:42 PM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by FlappyGiraffe - 02-18-2019, 01:10 AM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Wawazat - 02-18-2019, 03:10 PM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Lazyeye - 02-18-2019, 09:11 PM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Wibbly McButternutz - 02-18-2019, 09:11 PM
RE: Julio Tokolosh 02/17 - by Im_A_Boonana - 03-19-2019, 01:46 PM



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