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(This post was last modified: 03-03-2019, 01:21 PM by gillon.)

1. @slothfacekilla
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2. @Taxman100 
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3. @ztevans
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4. @Wally
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Love it! Thanks for doing me the honor of using my render in the tourney.

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02-26-2019, 01:31 PMslothfacekilla Wrote: Love it!  Thanks for doing me the honor of using my render in the tourney.

Yeah, @JSS is shitting on me though. :D

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02-26-2019, 01:40 PMgillon Wrote:
02-26-2019, 01:31 PMslothfacekilla Wrote: Love it!  Thanks for doing me the honor of using my render in the tourney.

Yeah, @JSS is shitting on me though. :D

its okay i love the wink!

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Sig 1: 6/10 = 600K
The sub artboard flare adds a fun bit of motion (better visible in the PNG version, ironically enough). Based on the masking of the player's arm, I can't tell if we are supposed to see the logo and surrounding area ahead of or behind the player render. I think you've used lighting in very interesting ways excluding on the render's face, which unfortunately in this composition is the most important.

Sig 2: 6/10 = 600K
The sportstemplates.net jersey + logo element looks pretty sharp, but I don't believe that it should feature so prominently without being further altered. The player render looks sharply masked on one side, but very loosely masked on the opposite. in regards to it all being black and white except for the face, I'm picturing the jersey as an all-star version of a Militia sweater, but not showing the skin colors of the crowd makes me think that this was closer to a happy accident, particularly with the full-color jersey logo on the right side of the sig. The text fits the image that it is laid over and the extension of the black and white looks good.

Sig 3: 7/10 = 700K
I'm not sure why the grayed out jerseys and backgrounds and full-color faces. It's the least interesting part of the sig, and to just have a flesh tone area as your only flash of color makes the entire 1/3 compete against the GIF. the motion part is well chosen and fits the theme of the signature very well. If the text had been a little more adventurous or tried to link the first third and the other side, I would have liked to bump this to an 8.


Sig 4: 8/10 = 825K
The full gray player render has had its shadows softened, flattening the image, directing the viewer's eye to the video action. the template logo is enhanced with a few lighting changes (could have had a darker shadow towards the bottom to help frame the player more. This is a well executed simple Gif sig. to enhance this one, I would have changed the text and tried out different depth options for the player render. It would have worked as a minimal piece without the flare on the goalie's head, but I'm glad that you took the risk.

Total Payout: 2.725M x 2 = 5.45M

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