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- JumpierPegasus - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Spangle@Jan 25 2012, 01:35 PM
Spellcheck that bad boy. Not sure if it needs it, but make sure you do. As a grader of MS', we will dock if there's too many grammar mistakes and I notice that a lot of SHL-to-VHL people have some trouble there (sorry guys over here, lol).
Tis why I'm a graphics guy and not an MS guy. :lol:
Can never think of what to write
- JumpierPegasus - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by habsfanfromontario@Jan 25 2012, 01:42 PM
I clicked the spell-check icon :D
Also a lot of graders like colour, coloring some of your titles and captions or something will help appearance
- HabsFanFromOntario - 01-25-2012
JP make me a sig for the VHL :wub:
- Lazyeye - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by JumpierPegasus@Jan 25 2012, 03:43 PM
Tis why I'm a graphics guy and not an MS guy. :lol:
Can never think of what to write
- Spangle - 01-25-2012
Noooo no color. I hate color. Just add pictures and you're fine.
Also, toss it into word. The spellchecker on the site blows more penis than Lazgreg.
- HabsFanFromOntario - 01-25-2012
Read it for me spangs?
- Lazyeye - 01-25-2012
i still havent gotten my second grade for ym sig...btw where do we write 590's or w/e?
- JumpierPegasus - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Spangle@Jan 25 2012, 01:47 PM
Noooo no color. I hate color. Just add pictures and you're fine.
Also, toss it into word. The spellchecker on the site blows more penis than Lazgreg.
I know like 2 or 3 other graders who love it :unsure:
- JumpierPegasus - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Lazyeye@Jan 25 2012, 01:50 PM
i still havent gotten my second grade for ym sig...btw where do we write 590's or w/e?
XM Radion/VHL.com section. Writing one about the draft right now since I can't write an MS after having a sig this week
Actually I haven't... Oh fuck it
- Spangle - 01-25-2012
Content: 2.75/3 - Nice article, but try and avoid staying around 500 words. 550+ is advised more often than staying at like 512. At 512, you barely squeaked over the minimum and the article felt brief. However, it will still a nice read.
Grammar: 2/2 - None of these are really enough to dock, but pay attention to some of your easier errors.
warcry -> war cry
goal but -> goal, but
VHLm -> VHLM
has it however that -> has it, however, that
prospects -> prospect
i'm -> I'm (lmao)
Appearance: .75/1 - The second picture is tiny as hell, try and find a better one. First one is LQ as well, but it's fine.
Overall: 5.5/6
- Spangle - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Lazyeye@Jan 25 2012, 04:50 PM
i still havent gotten my second grade for ym sig...btw where do we write 590's or w/e?
GFX graders there suck. They take a bit to actually do something, but it should be done by week's end.
- HabsFanFromOntario - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Spangle@Jan 25 2012, 05:56 PM
Content: 2.75/3 - Nice article, but try and avoid staying around 500 words. 550+ is advised more often than staying at like 512. At 512, you barely squeaked over the minimum and the article felt brief. However, it will still a nice read.
Grammar: 2/2 - None of these are really enough to dock, but pay attention to some of your easier errors.
warcry -> war cry
goal but -> goal, but
VHLm -> VHLM
has it however that -> has it, however, that
prospects -> prospect
i'm -> I'm (lmao)
Appearance: .75/1 - The second picture is tiny as hell, try and find a better one. First one is LQ as well, but it's fine.
Overall: 5.5/6
It's more then 512 I edited it after. just a btw.
- Spangle - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by JumpierPegasus@Jan 25 2012, 04:51 PM
I know like 2 or 3 other graders who love it :unsure:
They don't dock though. I never put color and get 1/1 on appearance each time.
- Spangle - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by habsfanfromontario@Jan 25 2012, 04:57 PM
It's more then 512 I edited it after. just a btw.
Fuck your shit. It rounds up anyways to 6, at least if the grader after me gives you a grade that allows it to round up (you average the two grades and then round in the proper direction). Also, for your 1st 3 PT's, they're doubled, so if you get a 6, it'd actually be a 12.
Same thing for you Metcalf. Your first 3 PT's are doubled.
- HabsFanFromOntario - 01-25-2012
Quote:Originally posted by Spangle@Jan 25 2012, 05:59 PM
Fuck your shit. It rounds up anyways to 6, at least if the grader after me gives you a grade that allows it to round up (you average the two grades and then round in the proper direction). Also, for your 1st 3 PT's, they're doubled, so if you get a 6, it'd actually be a 12.
Same thing for you Metcalf. Your first 3 PT's are doubled.
Would that count for the Bio and player profile?