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Wasty · 01-27-2020, 01:51 PM

could use about 3-4 tweaks, not overt changes, but tweaks but... it's better than the previous logo imo.

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Thunfish · 01-27-2020, 06:33 PM

Oh, also, as mentioned at the Anaheim LR, there's a triangle on your logo where the border is white instead of green.

***FuzzSHL*** · 01-28-2020, 02:07 AM

01-25-2020, 03:04 AMkarey Wrote: First thoughts:
- the outerglow isn't a professional and polished look. It should be solid
- the color palette does not match
- gold and green is present in the league with Buffalo, new england had an identity with the black+green, or the opportunity to introduce a new color scheme to the league. Maybe the classic green blue grey Hartford colors.
- logo facing west is bad juju
- the hockey stick shaft drastically changes in girth. Thick knob to skinny disappointing shaft.
- the text appearing behind the New England should be changed

I make shit on this logo but I love the potential here. Needs refinement

NGL I was expecting some shit for the jerseys, def not my best work here. Did most of it while having a stomach bug. If you have any tips on jersey design though I'd love to pick your brain sometime.

Aleksi Kettu

Winstobick · 01-28-2020, 02:20 AM

I dig it. Nice job!

karey · 01-28-2020, 05:31 AM

01-28-2020, 02:07 AMFuzzSHL Wrote:
01-25-2020, 03:04 AMkarey Wrote: First thoughts:
- the outerglow isn't a professional and polished look. It should be solid
- the color palette does not match
- gold and green is present in the league with Buffalo, new england had an identity with the black+green, or the opportunity to introduce a new color scheme to the league. Maybe the classic green blue grey Hartford colors.
- logo facing west is bad juju
- the hockey stick shaft drastically changes in girth. Thick knob to skinny disappointing shaft.
- the text appearing behind the New England should be changed

I make shit on this logo but I love the potential here. Needs refinement

NGL I was expecting some shit for the jerseys, def not my best work here. Did most of it while having a stomach bug. If you have any tips on jersey design though I'd love to pick your brain sometime.

I only shit because I actually like a lot of it. If it sucked butt I would move on, but because it has potential, I am critical

I'm quite impressed with a lot of it, but as I said, it's a shame it got fast tracked to being the official logo, as it leaves no time for a v2 to enhance the professionality of the brand.

The glaring things I would focus on:
-Changing the lime green to a darker less saturated hue
-Adding a black shape to cover the gap on the New England text where you can see the orange pop through
- and finally converting the glow into a hard border line rather than soft feathered edges.

karey · 01-28-2020, 05:32 AM

01-27-2020, 01:51 PMWasty Wrote: could use about 3-4 tweaks, not overt changes, but tweaks but... it's better than the previous logo imo.

What this bitch said.

Wasty · 01-28-2020, 05:52 AM

01-28-2020, 05:31 AMkarey Wrote:
01-28-2020, 02:07 AMFuzzSHL Wrote: NGL I was expecting some shit for the jerseys, def not my best work here. Did most of it while having a stomach bug. If you have any tips on jersey design though I'd love to pick your brain sometime.

I only shit because I actually like a lot of it. If it sucked butt I would move on, but because it has potential, I am critical

I'm quite impressed with a lot of it, but as I said, it's a shame it got fast tracked to being the official logo, as it leaves no time for a v2 to enhance the professionality of the brand.

The glaring things I would focus on:
-Changing the lime green to a darker less saturated hue
-Adding a black shape to cover the gap on the New England text where you can see the orange pop through
- and finally converting the glow into a hard border line rather than soft feathered edges.

what this bitch said.

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SlashACM · 01-28-2020, 07:58 AM

05-28-2019, 11:55 AMefiug Wrote: efiug

What this bitch said

Wasty · 01-28-2020, 09:37 AM

Taking some of @karey s notes and some adjustments of my own;

[Image: kjXzBPB.png]

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***Ace*** · 01-28-2020, 09:48 AM

Hate the blue. I'd rather keep the green/gray/white than adopt another color other than what was added.

It's interesting to see your mockup though.

JSS · 01-28-2020, 10:01 AM

01-28-2020, 09:37 AMWasty Wrote: Taking some of @karey s notes and some adjustments of my own;

the text makes it 10x better

Wasty · 01-28-2020, 10:52 AM

01-28-2020, 09:48 AMAce Wrote: Hate the blue. I'd rather keep the green/gray/white than adopt another color other than what was added.

It's interesting to see your mockup though.

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***FuzzSHL*** · 01-28-2020, 10:59 AM

01-28-2020, 05:31 AMkarey Wrote:
01-28-2020, 02:07 AMFuzzSHL Wrote: NGL I was expecting some shit for the jerseys, def not my best work here. Did most of it while having a stomach bug. If you have any tips on jersey design though I'd love to pick your brain sometime.

I only shit because I actually like a lot of it. If it sucked butt I would move on, but because it has potential, I am critical

I'm quite impressed with a lot of it, but as I said, it's a shame it got fast tracked to being the official logo, as it leaves no time for a v2 to enhance the professionality of the brand.

The glaring things I would focus on:
-Changing the lime green to a darker less saturated hue
-Adding a black shape to cover the gap on the New England text where you can see the orange pop through
- and finally converting the glow into a hard border line rather than soft feathered edges.

Oh 100%. I actually was going to try to change the outer glow to a solid outline but I don’t have the adobe suite anymore so I wasn’t able to open the illustrator file. I love the potential here

Aleksi Kettu

**.bojo** · 01-28-2020, 01:33 PM

01-28-2020, 10:52 AMWasty Wrote:
01-28-2020, 09:48 AMAce Wrote: Hate the blue. I'd rather keep the green/gray/white than adopt another color other than what was added.

It's interesting to see your mockup though.

I like this.

My only really minor thing is maybe the stick should be the same color as the bottom text so it's a little more different than the green border around it? Idk if it'd be better or not

Wasty · 01-28-2020, 02:01 PM

01-28-2020, 01:33 PM.bojo Wrote:
01-28-2020, 10:52 AMWasty Wrote:

I like this.

My only really minor thing is maybe the stick should be the same color as the bottom text so it's a little more different than the green border around it? Idk if it'd be better or not

Probably not that green but the light grey from the fur highlights is a better color for the stick.

[Image: 9fRiBBA.png]

Needs some cleaning up on the edges but I can do that tonight with a clean sweep of errors and fuckups.

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