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***blix900*** · 02-17-2019, 09:20 PM

Understand this is a rip from a show so I don't expect much here, but for the new ESHL

(Double Media for Draft)

*Carpy48* · 03-18-2019, 04:24 PM

Sig 1: First of all I like the placement of the render within the signature - it catches the viewer's attention. While you did put some effort in and changed the name on the jersey and some effects in the foreground, this signature would require more work on the background or alternatively you could remove the background from the render and add a new one.
5/10 (500k)

Sig 2: You did successfully manage to swap the jersey, so bonus points for that. However, everything else lacks effort and the lens flare effect doesn't really help much either. The text needs to be larger to work better. The idea is good, but I would expect at least a different background or working with more layers to improve the grade.
5/10 (500k)

Sig 3: This sig is much better than the previous two. You changed both the background and the jersey so that's very positive. The positioning and the colors work well, including the text (but again it's too small). Try to work with layers or effects (e.g. work with shadows/lights) to create more depth and make sure the elements in the foreground are sharper than the background.
6/10 (575k)

Logo: Unfortunately this is not very original (as you mentioned yourself the main element is borrowed from a show) and looks like you quickly put it together. The borders lack effort and overall I would expect more creativity.
3/10 (300k)

Total: 1.9M

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