2x Toedragon84 4/21
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![]() Registered S37 Challenge Cup Champion ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() [/font][/color]3 || A: 19 || PTS: 42 || +/- 0 || PIMS: 50 [/size][/size][/size][/size][/font][/size][/color] || A: 51 || PTS: 85 || +/- -10 || PIMS: 38 WIN - Opted out WIN - Most TPE all time - 2285 ] [font=Arial] ![]() Registered S37 Challenge Cup Champion ![]() Registered Posting Freak
Sig 1: 7/10 = 700K
good typeface choice and manipulation. The colors are very strong and the vignette looks great. The face, although matching the text, looks a little flat. I have concerns about the shadow mustache. The flares flares look pretty good and do a good job directing the eye. Sig 2: 7/10 = 700K The flares are very strong and do a good job of helping to frame the render. When playing with the levels, you lost a little detail in the helmet and jersey. The background scratches look good and compliment the "flare frame". The text color is good, but the typeface doesn't add that much to this. it might just be the manipulations that are competing with the flares. Sig 3: 8/10 = 825K The face is a little overexposed, but it doesn't hurt it as much as it could. The white collar is the natural highlight, so the facial edits help tie it all in. The shadows of the jersey look great, and the chest shadow fading into the background looks very cool. The text works very well and compliments the piece, although i would like to see a more intentional placement of the wording (aligning "victor" to the left with the last name would have helped). interesting background with good color manipulation that compliments the other components. Sig 4: 7/10 = 700K Quality facial light manipulation. You lost a little in the helmet, but the level control in the jersey looks sharp. The coloring of the glares, distress marks, and splashes of color in the background and text looks very good. The typeface fights the rest of the piece. the smaller text should be aligned in some manor to the major text, and sized appropriately (aim for 50% of height, adjust tracking as necessary). Payout: 2.925M x 2 = 5.85M |
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